Ow.
Layout wise, it's not too bad. Element order is quite nice. However, it is just way to big for the short layout. 150-some-odd-foot tall ride usually has a very lengthy layout, where as this could be nicely done at 100ft. Lots of banking needs to be done, mostly at the end (pulling 5G lat is very bad). If anything, it's underbanked. It's also very bad for your trains to overshoot the brake run (IE, they're too short and too low). I'm not going to touch the subject or prefabs *twitch*
Overall, you have inspiration and ideas. This is very clear. You know what makes a good layout and a thrilling ride. However you just need to build on the skills and learn from your rides. Any good ridemaker will tell you it takes practice (any bad ridemaker will tell you it takes tools
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3/10, but keep at it!