Spectre

[Jared]

"The Ghost still walks them der' woods and it be a bad time to go a searchin' for lost children. Believe me, their gone now..."

Prepare to join the hunt soon...

 

[bob_3_]

Is this based on the Spectres from His Dark Materials trilogy!? =D

 

[Jared]

No, it's got a story that I've been working on. I didn't know of any books (or films?) that have Spectre's in?

 

[Jared]

The Story Unfolds...

Three local children are lost, presumed dead, within the Iron Woods. The three children were thought to be looking for they're dog in the woods and have not been seen since wednesday afternoon. The Children's parents are calling for witness' to the incident. As most of you are already aware, the woods are rumoured to be haunted by the ghost of Marcus Dailey, our towns most infamous murderer. It's known to be very rare for anyone to leave the woods alive so we really need your information if you saw anything. Please let us know as soon as you can.

 

[Antinos]

I love the look of the trains. They're very sharp, especially with that logo on the front.

 

[Jared]

Just a little update. No story additions today. Just showing off a bit more of the track.

 

[Dave]

That screenshot was not worth the post...Not exactly showing us anything except a Rita style jumble of track.

 

[Xpress]

That screenshot was not worth the post...Not exactly showing us anything except a Rita style jumble of track.

Did you even read what he said?

I quote:

Just a little update. No story additions today. Just showing off a bit more of the track

 

[Jared]

Thank you Xpress. I am merely trying to build up to it. To you know, do something different rather than do what everyone else does here and post layouts straight away. Whats the point of that? You've seen everything to do with the ride and it'll make you less likely to download it.

 

[Slash]

Well to be fairly honest, Dave is right, I mean seriously. An update is updating someone with something new. That was nothing new as it was a picture of track, what does that tell us?

A. It has track.
B. Its a roller coaster.
C. The track goes over another bit of track.

Yeah, so at least "build it up" with more and more interesting pictures. Rather than showing us its intamin and then showing us its track repeatedly.

And the point of showing the layout is so you can get improvement tips.

 

[Jared]

This track is 100% tool built, and has no need for track tweaks. It's been tested by myself and others multiple times. Theres nothing that needs to change.

 

[Slash]

I think you missed my main point. Normally the main point is in the majority of the text, not the final line.

 

[Dave]

Dirty tool user.

 

[Brookes]

I agree with a bit from both sides. I agree with Dave that it should show a bit more to tease us, but it wasn't a totally pointless post as it still showed something. However, I agree with CCJared aswell as I like to reveal little bits of the layout as I go along like him, instead of showing it all straight away as once my track building is done I'm not going to change anything. So yeah, let's not waste any more posts and get back to this project.

 

[Jared]

Dirty tool user.

Whats wrong with that? Everyone has they're preference. Tools are mine.

I agree with a bit from both sides. I agree with Dave that it should show a bit more to tease us, but it wasn't a totally pointless post as it still showed something. However, I agree with CCJared aswell as I like to reveal little bits of the layout as I go along like him, instead of showing it all straight away as once my track building is done I'm not going to change anything. So yeah, let's not waste any more posts and get back to this project.

Thanks, its about bloody time someone understands that I am trying to achieve.

 

[Slash]

Dirty tool user.

Whats wrong with that? Everyone has they're preference. Tools are mine.

That smiley on the end meant it was a joke.

I agree with a bit from both sides. I agree with Dave that it should show a bit more to tease us, but it wasn't a totally pointless post as it still showed something. However, I agree with CCJared aswell as I like to reveal little bits of the layout as I go along like him, instead of showing it all straight away as once my track building is done I'm not going to change anything. So yeah, let's not waste any more posts and get back to this project.

Thanks, its about bloody time someone understands that I am trying to achieve.

We do, its just your doing it a bit pointlessly... The track does look nice but, hell what can we say about that last photo apart from, nice colour. That is our point.

 

[Dave]

Dirty tool user.

Whats wrong with that? Everyone has they're preference. Tools are mine.

Yes but it's WRONG! :roll:

 

[Xpress]

[quote="CCJared']We do, its just your doing it a bit pointlessly... The track does look nice but, hell what can we say about that last photo apart from, nice colour. That is our point.

[/quote]

That's all you really need to say, other than it looks nice, or looks interesting. CCJared won't show the entire layout, to keep things interesting.

Honestly, when I see pictures of big sections of the layout, I don't really want to follow the project, as giving small teasers here and there keep things interesting when there's not much shown.

I tend to do that because A. I'm too lazy to photoshop a pic with a logo in it blocking out key bits, or B. I want to frame it to confuse you and make you wonder what goes where

 

[Ethan]

I really like the trains, good job!

 

[Jared]

We do, its just your doing it a bit pointlessly... The track does look nice but, hell what can we say about that last photo apart from, nice colour. That is our point.

Theres a lot you can tell from that last picture. It quite clearly shows an inversion if even looked at it properly.

Heres a "more interesting" update for you all.